【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你于 2 月 25 日在購(gòu)書網(wǎng)站 www.lovereading.com 上購(gòu)買了 The Call of the Wild一書。收到后發(fā)現(xiàn)一些問題，請(qǐng)就此事給 lovereading.com 寫一封信投訴，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.寫信目的； 2.存在問題； 3.要求建議。

注意:1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madam,

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Li Hua, a frequent customer of your website. I feel terrible to trouble you but I have to make a complaint about my terrible shopping experience on www.lovereading.com, which used to be my most reliable online bookstore.

On February 25th, I ordered the novel The Call of the Wild on your website. Unexpectedly, it was one week later that the book was delivered. What's worse, when I opened the parcel, I was disappointed to discover the front cover was damaged. The last straw was that several pages of the newly published book were missing You can never imagine how annoyed I was at that moment.

I strongly recommend that you should either offer me a replacement or give me a full refund. Above all, good service leads to booming business. I believe you will take my complaint seriously and I am looking forward to your early response.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一投訴信，就自己在購(gòu)書網(wǎng)站上購(gòu)買的The Call of the Wild一書出現(xiàn)的問題進(jìn)行投訴并提出建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。第一段描述寫信目的；第二段描述存在的問題；第三段講述解決方案的要求和建議。

要求：1.寫信目的（make a complaint）

2.描述問題

1）發(fā)貨時(shí)間晚（one week later）

2）封面損壞（the front cover was damaged）

3) 頁碼缺失。（pages missing）

3.解決方案的要求和建議：退換書籍或全額退款（offer me a replacement or give me a full refund）

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

feel terrible to do; make a complaint about; used to be; it was+強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that+其他內(nèi)容; what’s worse; be disappointed to do; either…or; above all; take sth. seriously; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. I feel terrible to trouble you but I have to make a complaint about my terrible shopping experience on www.lovereading.com, which used to be my most reliable online bookstore.

2. Unexpectedly, it was one week later that the book was delivered.

3. What's worse, when I opened the parcel, I was disappointed to discover the front cover was damaged.

4. I strongly recommend that you should either offer me a replacement or give me a full refund.

5. Above all, good service leads to booming business.

6. I believe you will take my complaint seriously and I am looking forward to your early response.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：what’s worse; besides; moreover; furthermore

2.表并列選擇關(guān)系：either… or

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改

練習(xí)冊(cè)系列答案
相關(guān)習(xí)題

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】聽下面一段較長(zhǎng)對(duì)話，回答以下小題。

【1】How do most readers find Island Intrigue” 2

A.Absurd.B.Boring.C.Thrilling.

【2】What kind of books do the speakers both like?

A.Horror stories.B.Science fictions.C.Adventures.

【3】What will the speakers do?

A.Exchange books.

B.Go to the library together.

C.Fix a time to communicate ideas.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】The joey—what Australians call a baby kangaroo—stays in this built-in baby _______ until it can survive independently.

A.carriageB.carrierC.clientD.component

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】 Old Mrs. Lynn was working in the cottage, hanging the washed clothes on the line. What she wasn’t aware was that some children were hiding in a nearby tree watching her every move. They were sure that she was a witch and wanted to find the evidence.

They watched nervously as she took a broomstick to sweep the dirt from her stone steps. But much to their disappointment, she didn’t get on the broomstick and fly off. The old lady only looked up when her hen began to make sounds loudly — signaling that she had laid an egg in the nest on the top of the haystack. (干草堆).

The old lady put aside her broomstick and walked to the haystack, followed by Michael, a black cat she had rescued from a fox trap. With only three legs, it was hard for Michael to keep up with his mistress. The cat was proof for the children that only a witch would own a black cat with three legs! Accidentally, she tripped and crashed to the ground. The children were in horror.

“Should we go and help her?” asked Mia.

“What if it’s a trick?” replied Patrick. “She probably knows we’re here. Witches know things like that!”

After thinking for a while, Julia said, “Anyway, we should go and check whether she is all right.”

Approaching prudently, they could see a wound on the old lady’s forehead. She had knocked her head on a stone and was unconscious.

“Go and get Dad,” Mia yelled to her brothers. “Tell him about the accident.”

Later, in the hospital, the old lady smiled her thanks. “I was so lucky that you lovely children happened to be passing when I fell. I must have yelled quite loudly.” The children exchanged guilty glances, but were very pleased that she was not a witch after all!

【1】Mrs. Lynn stopped sweeping when ________.

A.her doorstep became very clean

B.she heard the hen making sounds loudly

C.she noticed the children in the tree

D.her cat Michael managed to get her attention

【2】Why was Patrick not willing to help Mrs. Lynn when she fell?

A.He thought that she could be cheating them.

B.He was afraid of the three-legged black cat.

C.He did not think that she was hurt in the fall.

D.He knew he and the others shouldn’t have been in her tree.

【3】Which of the definitions is closest in meaning to the underlined word “prudently” ?

A.Slowly.B.Hurriedly.

C.Carefully.D.Quietly.

【4】What is the main idea of the story?

A.Constant dropping wears away a stone.

B.Never judge a book by its cover.

C.A friend in need is a friend indeed.

D.A good medicine tastes bitter.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，負(fù)責(zé)安排舉辦�；@球隊(duì)和來訪的美國(guó)學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的籃球友誼賽，請(qǐng)你給美方帶隊(duì)老師Mr. Brown 寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 寫信目的；

2. 比賽安排；

3. 注意事項(xiàng)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié).以使行文連貫。

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】單詞拼寫（每空一詞）

【1】__________________(就個(gè)人而言), I prefer to work in a team.

【2】A lot of __________________(有毒的) waste water comes from that chemical factory.

【3】The competition attracted over 500 competitors_______________(代表) 8 different countries.

【4】She looked back on her career with great ___________________(滿意).

【5】I had a physical problem and had to go to hospital for a _____________(徹底的/詳盡的) examination.

【6】The new drug has great ________________(重大意義) for the treatment of the disease.

【7】Alan _______________(發(fā)誓) that he would do everything in his power to help us

【8】All the scientists ________________(同意) to the view that the increase in the earth’s temperature was due to the burning of fossil fuels.

【9】He glanced briefly towards her but there was no sign of _______________(認(rèn)出).

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】 Influenza is an infection caused by flu viruses travelling through the air and entering the body through the nose or mouth. From October 2018 to early May 2019, up to 61,200 people died due to flu complications, while up to 647,000 people were hospitalized, according to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Despite similar symptoms, a cold is milder than the flu while flu symptoms develop more suddenly and severely and can impact your body above and below the neck. 【1】

Several factors can lead to Influenza. 【2】 You can catch the flu, breathing in these droplets, or touching objects such as doorknobs or keyboards that are contaminated with the virus and then touching your nose, or mouth. People under 4, or above 65 or with a weakened immune system are at greater risk of catching the flu.

Treatment without delay plays a dominant role. If you promptly see your doctor upon noticing symptoms, he or she may give you an antiviral drug, oseltamivir. 【3】“The best way to treat the flu is to rest, drink fluids and use any other remedies that best relieve your symptoms such as pain reliever for headaches and achy muscles.” says a professor of infectious diseases at Northwestern Memorial Hospital.

Prevention is better than defense.【4】 Experts widely agree that the single best way is to get the vaccine (疫苗) each year, which is appropriate for anyone 6 months and older. 【5】 Moreover, practicing good hygiene can prevent flu germs from spreading. Highly recommended are washing your hands, coughing or sneezing into a tissue, avoiding touching your nose and mouth, cleaning surfaces and objects like keyboards and telephones and avoiding crowded areas.

A.Approaches to flu vary from expert to expert.

B.You can escape catching influenza with some common-sense health practices.

C.When someone with the flu coughs or sneezes, droplets carrying the virus enter the air.

D.These can include fever, achy muscles, sore throat, cough, headache, chills, fatigue or vomiting.

E.The flu shot protects against the most common three or four flu viruses research indicates that year.

F.If taken within two days, the medicine can lessen symptoms and shorten the length of time you are sick by about a day.

G.To determine if you have the flu or a cold, your doctor will do a physical exam, ask about your symptoms, and possibly do a lab test.

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】Was it in 2008 ______ he was still at middle school _____ the boy became expert at computer?

A.that; whereB.when; whereC.that; whenD.when; that

查看答案和解析>>

科目：高中英語 來源： 題型：

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你們班留學(xué)生 Jim 現(xiàn)在美國(guó)居家學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)給他寫一個(gè)電 子郵件，內(nèi)容如下：1.告訴他你們學(xué)校即將舉行在線運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)（運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)形式，內(nèi)容……）；

2. 邀請(qǐng)他參加。

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于 50；

2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Jim,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

查看答案和解析>>

同步練習(xí)冊(cè)答案