Question

書面表達（滿分25分）
現(xiàn)在，越來越多的中學生缺乏體育鍛煉，導致身體素質下降。根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文。
缺乏鍛煉的原因（學習任務太重、鍛煉辛苦、無法堅持……）
你對學校和對同學們的建議
注意：可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

Now it is known that fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, which makes them weak and easily tired.
There are many reasons for this. First of all, some of the students complain that they have too much homework, resulting in less time to take exercise. In addition, some of them think that it is very difficult for them to keep doing exercise, because it is a very hard thing.
Because of lack of physical activities, many students are in poor health. I suggest that our school should take measures to encourage more students to take part in sports. For us students, no matter how busy we are, it is necessary to spare some time to do exercise.

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語提示的提綱類寫作。文章只給出簡單的提示，這要求考生在寫作的時候，需要發(fā)揮自己的想象能力適當拓寬。成文時應注意以下幾點：1.文章內(nèi)容要齊全：（1）引出話題；（2）缺乏鍛煉的原因（學習任務太重、鍛煉辛苦、無法堅持……）；（3）你對學校和對同學們的建議；2.三段成文法。第一段總說；第二段闡述現(xiàn)象；第三段發(fā)表自己的看法。3.人稱：第三人稱為主；4.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；5.適當使用一些高級詞匯、句型和短語，以增加文章的檔次；6.恰當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了從句：1.定語從句Now it is known that fewer and fewer students do sports regularly, which makes them weak and easily tired.2.賓語從句some of the students complain that they have too much homework, resulting in less time to take exercise.3.狀語從句because it is a very hard thing. no matter how busy we are, 使用非謂語動詞短語：resulting in less time to take exercise 使用了連詞和插入語：First of all, In addition, In addition, For us students,使用了短語：result in，keep doing，Because of， lack of等。