Question

假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)（the Internet）上得知一個(gè)國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營(summer camp)，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。
內(nèi)容主要包括：
1.自我介紹(包括英語能力);
2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）；
3.希望獲準(zhǔn)。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右：
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫
3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Regards,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One Possible Version
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求寫一封電子郵件申請參加國際中學(xué)生組織在新加坡舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.這句話用了同位語從句， I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.這句話用了并列句和賓語從句， I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. 這句話里面的as well是比較高級的詞組，I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.這里be accepted as詞組，還有了What is more,這樣的詞組可以使句與句之間更連貫。