分析 本文是應(yīng)用文,根據(jù)所給要點寫一封電子郵件,為即將在你校舉行的國際友好學(xué)校教育論壇服務(wù).請用英語寫一封郵件申請參加.寫作要點:1.寫信目的;2.自我介紹;3.希望獲準(zhǔn).屬提綱作文.在寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主.時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主.
(高分句型一)not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience,but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.
該句使用了not only…but also…的句型,而且在前半句使用了not only can volunteer work…倒裝句;
(高分句型二)in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.
該句使用了定語從句,先行詞為activities,in which引導(dǎo)定語從句;
高級詞匯:work as 作為;enrich豐富;not only…but also…不僅..而且…
In addition、Furthermore等過渡詞銜接;
解答 One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for.In my opinion,(高分句型一)not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience,but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.
(自我介紹) I am good at English.In addition,(高分句型二)in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.Furthermore,my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.
I would appreciate an interview at your convenience.I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the future.(表達希望得到批準(zhǔn))
With all my best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.
點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次,平時需注意積累短語和重要句型.
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