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16．假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Chris剛剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)，感到一切都很陌生．他在郵件中向你詢問(wèn)如何盡快融入新環(huán)境．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息回信：
1．多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；
2．積極參加學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)；
3．向老師尋求幫助．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Chris，
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信，同時(shí)也屬于提綱類短文．要求以李華的身份給筆友Chris寫(xiě)信，回答他關(guān)于如何融入新環(huán)境的問(wèn)題．所以要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主的時(shí)態(tài)．要點(diǎn)：1．知悉對(duì)方轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)以后難以融入新環(huán)境．2．多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；3．積極參加學(xué)�；顒�(dòng)；4．向老師尋求幫助．考生可以適當(dāng)添加一些書(shū)信轉(zhuǎn)換常見(jiàn)的串聯(lián)句，如在文章最后可以加上I am looking forward to hearing from you．等句子．建議文章分成三段，第一段敘述知悉對(duì)方的轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)以后不適應(yīng)新學(xué)校的情況．第二段闡述具體的建議．第三段表示希望自己的建議有效，并期待收到對(duì)方的回信．
【名師點(diǎn)睛】
本篇范文是難得一篇優(yōu)秀的提綱來(lái)作文．本文從題材來(lái)說(shuō)屬于應(yīng)用文，要點(diǎn)都給出來(lái)了．文章的結(jié)構(gòu)也不存在較大的難題，所以范文在遣詞造句方面下足了功夫．最突出的就是文章中的高級(jí)句式，如非限制性定語(yǔ)從句…in more activities，which usually involve teamwork…；分詞做狀語(yǔ)用法Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers；同時(shí)范文中串聯(lián)詞的使用也是一個(gè)亮點(diǎn)，第二段中提出了三個(gè)建議，作者使用了first、second連接了這些要點(diǎn)．
First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）
In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）
Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Chris，
      I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful．
      First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．（高分句型一）In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．（高分句型二）Lately，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking our teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．（高分句型三）
     I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know． 
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．