4.請(qǐng)以"One person I'm grateful to"為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100-120個(gè)詞的短文,記述一個(gè)你認(rèn)為值得感謝的人.要求如下:
1.內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例;
2.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明值得感謝的原因或從中得到的啟示;
3.文中不得透漏個(gè)人信息.
注意:文章的標(biāo)題已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù)).
One Person I'm Grateful to
                                                                        

分析 本文主語(yǔ)開(kāi)放性的作文,話題是"One person I'm grateful to".這個(gè)人可以是現(xiàn)實(shí)中的人也可以是文學(xué)作品中某個(gè)人物.考生可以敘述身邊人物的具體事例來(lái)說(shuō)明自己感激的人的具體品質(zhì).在范文中,作者選擇了自己的英語(yǔ)老師為例.在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭.同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體,如besides,further,last but not least等.在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文最大的亮點(diǎn)在于高級(jí)詞匯的使用,如be supposed to do sth應(yīng)該做某事;dedicate oneself to….專(zhuān)心于…;regardless of不管,不顧…;gain confidence贏得自信;高級(jí)句式的使用也較為頻繁,如which worried me a lot.中的which引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句.以及Having beenpersuaded to change my attitude,I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessnessand gained confidence as well.中的非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞having beenpersuaded…用法.
We are supposed to be grateful to people who arealways there with us because they are the charming gardeners who make our soulsblossom.(高分句型一)
During the previous study,my biggest flaw must come tocarelessness,which worried me a lot.(高分句型二)
Having been persuaded tochange my attitude,I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessnessand gained confidence as well.(高分句型三)
 I am grateful to my English teacher for all thesupport he has given me,which has made me stronger and a better person.(高分句型四)

解答 We are supposed to be grateful to people who arealways there with us because they are the charming gardeners who make our soulsblossom.(高分句型一)
       My English teacher is such a great soul,to whom I owemany thanks.During the previous study,my biggest flaw must come tocarelessness,which worried me a lot.(高分句型二)To make matters worse,I was too anxiousto seek the fundamental reason for my failure.I just dedicated myself to hugeamounts of practice,regardless of repeated mistakes.Fortunately,my teachernoticed it and offered to have a long talk with me.Having been persuaded tochange my attitude,I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessnessand gained confidence as well.(高分句型三)
       I am grateful to my English teacher for all thesupport he has given me,which has made me stronger and a better person.(高分句型四)

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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