Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你們班來自美國的交換生Peter最近在學校舉辦的最美中國散文大賽中沒有獲獎而情緒低落，請你根據所給提示用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，要點包括：

1．表示同情；

2．給予安慰；

表達祝愿。

注意：1.詞數：100詞左右（開頭和結尾已給出，但不計入總詞數。）

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 散文：prose

Dear Peter,

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Yours faithfully

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

I feel deeply sorry to hear that you failed to win an award of the Most Beautiful Prose Contest held in our school ,which made you so depressed. It doesn’t matter .

I know you are a big fan of our Chinese literature ,particularly taking pleasure in the famous proses written by famous prosers and writers, such as BaJin,LaoShe , CaoYu and so on. I had ever the same experience as you have. Just as the famous saying goes , “ Failure is the mother of success.” The more you practice ,the better you will be. Don’t lose heart and never give up . I sincerely hope you are sure to achieve your dream with much effort.

If I can be of any help , please don’t hesitate to let me know . Please remember nothing can stop you to make your dream come true once you make up your mind to do it !

Best wishes to you .

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

這篇書面表達屬于應用類作文，是一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據提示可知，假定你是李華，你們班來自美國的交換生Peter最近在學校舉辦的最美中國散文大賽中沒有獲獎而情緒低落，請你根據所給提示用英語給他寫一封電子郵件。人稱為第一人稱，時態(tài)應為一般現在時。

第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：fail to未能，depressed沮喪的，fan迷，Failure is the mother of success.失敗乃成功之母，the + 比較級，the + 比較級，越…越，lose heart失去信心，give up放棄，sincerely真誠地，achieve實現，hesitate猶豫，come true實現。make up one’s mind下定決心。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。