Question

【題目】如圖所示，一群高中學生正在操場撿拾垃圾，旁邊有部分學生在踢球玩耍，對撿垃圾者熟視無睹。請你根據(jù)對這幅照片的理解用英語寫一篇150詞左右的短文。短文應包含以下內容：

1. 簡要描述照片內容，如情景、人物、動作，等等；

2. 目前校園內環(huán)保狀況；

3. 你自己的感想和建議。

注意：

1. 可參照圖片及下面文章開頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。

2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。

As is vividly shown in the picture,

Answer 1

【答案】

As is vividly shown in the picture, some volunteers are bending down and picking up rubbish, with plastic bags in their hands and sweat on their foreheads. Nearby are some boys playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing.

While focusing on their studies, some students do not pay enough attention to their behavior at school, and littering is the most common. That’s not appropriate behavior for us high school students. It not only dirties the environment, but also does great harm to the image of the school.

As a matter of fact, a clean environment can never be emphasized too much. It beautifies our school, making it a good place to study in. We should develop good habits of protecting the environment. Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin. Let’s keep in mind that a better environment means a better life.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于說明文，根據(jù)提示信息和圖表說明來介紹具體情況。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照方位順序進行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如倒裝句和賓語從句穿插：Nearby are some boys playing football, totally ignoring what other students are doing；It beautifies our school, making it a good place to study in.非謂語動詞作狀語；還有讓步狀語從句：Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into the dustbin。此外，文章還使用了大量短語bend down，pick up, focus on , pay attention to，do great harm to，develop good habits of，keep in mind等。插入語As a matter of fact，以及連詞not…but… 的使用使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。