Question

13．假設(shè)你是李華，剛剛參加了在London為中學(xué)生舉行的為期一周的關(guān)于各國傳統(tǒng)文化交流的冬令營活動，請你給組織者Mr．Black 寫一封郵件表達感謝之意，并請他幫忙寄回你忘記帶回的數(shù)碼相機．
要點如下：1、對交流活動的感受．2、有關(guān)相機的信息及其重要性．3、表示感謝．
注意：
1、詞數(shù)100左右；
2、可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Mr．Black，
I am Li HuaI am writing to convey my deep gratitude for the winter camp you organized for us teenagers，which is really beneficial to us．During the one-week activity，not only did I broaden my horizon to get familiar with traditional culture of different countries but I made so many foreign friends as well．I had a wonderful time there．
By the way，would you please do me a favor？Because of my carelessness，I left my digital camera in the Room 201 of the hotel where we lived．It contains all the valuable photos I took during the activity，which mean a lot to me．If you could find it，would you please post it to me and I will pay for the postage．
I'd appreciate it if you could assist me to get my precious camera back．Thank you very much．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
I am writing to convey my deep gratitude for the winter camp you organized for us teenagers，which is really beneficial to us
我想表達我深深的感謝你為我們組織青少年冬令營，這真是對我們有益．
高分句型二：
If you could find it，would you please post it to me and I will pay for the postage．
如果你能找到它，請把它給我，我會付郵費．

解答 Dear Mr．Black，
I am Li Hua．I am writing to convey my deep gratitude for the winter camp you organized for us teenagers，which is really beneficial to us（高分句型一）．During the one-week activity，not only did I broaden my horizon to get familiar with traditional culture of different countries but I made so many foreign friends as well．I had a wonderful time there．
By the way，would you please do me a favor？Because of my carelessness，I left my digital camera in the Room 201 of the hotel where we lived．It contains all the valuable photos I took during the activity，which mean a lot to me．If you could find it，would you please post it to me and I will pay for the postage（高分句型二）．
I'd appreciate it if you could assist me to get my precious camera back．Thank you very much．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．