Question

現(xiàn)在有的家長(zhǎng)為了鼓勵(lì)孩子好好學(xué)習(xí)，用金錢(qián)來(lái)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)孩子在學(xué)業(yè)上的表現(xiàn)。如：考試成績(jī)優(yōu)良或在各種比賽得獎(jiǎng)的，每次獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)100元甚至幾千元元不等。請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)此現(xiàn)象的看法。
寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)還應(yīng)包括：
1) 你的父母（或親戚等）是怎樣鼓勵(lì)你學(xué)習(xí)的；
2) 你認(rèn)為除了金錢(qián)，怎樣才能鼓勵(lì)孩子更好地學(xué)習(xí)。
要求：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使文意通順；
2.詞數(shù)120左右；
3.開(kāi)頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
Nowadays, some parents like to reward their child with a certain amount of money if he/she performs well in school. For example, _______________________________________
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Answer 1

Nowadays, some parents like to reward their child with certain amount of money if he/she gets a good grade or wins a contest. For example, if a child scores over 90 in any subject, or wins a contest, he/she may be rewarded from 100 to 2000Yuan.
This is quite common now and does stimulate some students to work hard and achieve success. Furthermore, it is welcome by many young people.
However, this is not the only way to study successfully. As I remember, my parents told me some stories about some ancient scholars, encouraging me to learn from them. Whenever I made progress, they would praise me generously. When I met with difficulties, they would listen to me carefully and gave me suggestion.
I think it’s very important to be self-motivated. It’s a must for one to form a good habit of studying, too. These may help students to learn happily.

本文是對(duì)父母用錢(qián)來(lái)獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)孩子的學(xué)習(xí)這一現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行的討論，是一篇半開(kāi)放性的文章。要靠考生自己梳理要點(diǎn)，并轉(zhuǎn)換成英文。在談及你的父母如何鼓勵(lì)你，可以舉一些父母獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)書(shū)本，獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)旅游這些更有價(jià)值的獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候注意使用合適的連接詞，高級(jí)的句型和高級(jí)的詞匯，讓文章更有條理，更有文采。