Question

隨著生活水平的不斷提高與醫(yī)療技術(shù)的不斷進步，中國人口老齡化問題日益凸顯。根據(jù)下表提示，請以“How to solve the problem of supporting the aged”為題，談談自己對解決人口老齡化問題的看法。
家人：照顧老人，多看望老人，理解老人；
社區(qū)：組織有利于老人身心健康的活動；
政府：建立完善的養(yǎng)老體系，投資興建敬老院。
注意：
1. 字數(shù)為100字左右；
2. 參考詞匯：體系 system  敬老院 old folks’ home

Answer 1

How to solve the problem of supporting the aged?
As a result of the improvement in living standard and medical care, China is becoming an aging society.
To solve the problem, in my opinion, all the people should do their duties. Families should care for aging relations. They should spare time to see the aged. If possible, it is better so spend more time staying with them. The community should organize more activities, designed to the improvement in their physical and psychological health. The government should build a perfect system. More old folk’s homes should be built, where the aged can enjoy their life.
Luckily, more attention has been paid to the problem. Getting old won’t be such a depressing thing after all.

試題分析：這是提綱類寫作，話題是抽煙的危害問題，文章的要點是以提綱的形式給出來的，不是很具體，內(nèi)容有：1，家人：照顧老人，多看望老人，理解老人；2.社區(qū)：組織有利于老人身心健康的活動；3.政府：建立完善的養(yǎng)老體系，投資興建敬老院.考生需要做的就是以提綱為中心，適當增加細節(jié)，考生要自己去發(fā)揮，使內(nèi)容充實難度，這也增加了作文的難度，要求學生有很高的拓展能力，在確定寫作內(nèi)容后，考生要考慮的是選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。
【亮點說明】這篇文章涵蓋了要點，簡潔又不乏好的短語和句型： As a result of因為，由于，care for關心， after all To solve the problem, in my opinion, all the people should do their duties.這句話使用了不定式做目的狀語和插入語， If possible, it is better so spend more time staying with them. 這句話用了省略句，The community should organize more activities, designed to the improvement in their physical and psychological health.這句話使用了過去分詞做后置定語， More old folk’s homes should be built, where the aged can enjoy their life.這句話用了非限制性定語從句， Luckily, more attention has been paid to the problem. 這句話使用了pay attention to這個詞組的被動語態(tài)。