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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student held at the end of September. Unluckily, I performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my hobby—fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits.

Answer 1

【答案】The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student∧ held at the end of September. Unluckily, I

that was

performed poorly in mathematics and chemistry, all of which used to be my strong subject. As a result of, my total

both subjects \

test score fell greatly and ranked 400th in our grade. I feel upset and my mother suggested I spend some time in my

felt on

hobby-fishing for relaxation. Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend. There I fished for a

Driven

whole day but calmed myself down. The joy from fishing successful pushed me out off low spirits.

and successfully

【解析】1.which 改為that。

考查定語從句。The first monthly exam which I took as a high school student∧ held at the end of September。本句中The first monthly exam 是先行詞，在定語從句中作I took 的賓語，但先行詞被序數(shù)詞the first修飾。根據(jù)定語從句中如果先行詞被序數(shù)詞修飾，關(guān)系代詞只能用that，不能用which。故which改為that。

2 在held前面加上was。

考查被動語態(tài)。我作為一個高中生的第一次月考，在九月底舉行。主語是the first monthly exam，與舉行hold 是被動關(guān)系。故要用被動語態(tài)。因為這是主句的謂語動詞，不是非謂語，故要加上was，構(gòu)成 was held 。

3.all改為both。

考查代詞。不幸的是我的數(shù)學和化學成績不好，這兩項以前都是我的強項。先行詞是數(shù)學和化學，在從句中作of 的賓語。兩者要用both，三者或三者以上的“都”要用all。故要把all改為both。

4.subject 改為subjects。

考查名詞單復數(shù)。兩門功課是復數(shù)，故要用復數(shù)，即加S。。

5.去掉of。

考察固定搭配。因此，我考試成績的總分大大下降，在我們的年級中排名第四百。as a result,因此，結(jié)果是；as a result of …由于，作為……結(jié)果，因為。而且Of 后面必須有賓語。故去掉of。

6.feel改為felt。

考查時態(tài)。我（那時）感到非常傷心。整篇文章講的是過去的事，用的是一般過去時。故把feel 改為felt。

7.in 改為on。

考查固定搭配。spend some time/money in doing sth.或spend some time/money on sth.故要把in改為on. Spend some time on my hobby-fishing for relaxation。

8.Driving 改為Driven。

考查非謂語。Driving by my mother’s suggestion, I went to a pond on a weekend.此句中。Drive 的邏輯主語是I，這兩者之間是被動關(guān)系，故要用過去分詞作狀語。在我母親的建議（驅(qū)使）下。我周末去了一個池塘。我是被驅(qū)使，故把driving 改為driven。

9.but改為and。

考查連詞。我在那里釣了一整天，而且我也平靜下來。句子前后不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是并列關(guān)系。故but 改為and。

10.successful 改為successfully。

考查副詞。成功捕魚的喜悅使我走出心情低落。Successfully用于修飾動詞，不能用形容詞。