Question

【題目】假設你是高二學生李華，你的表弟王林即將要上高中。請你給他寫一封郵件告訴他如何盡快地適用高中生活以及如何與新同學相處融洽等。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭以為你擬好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Wang lin,

I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Wang lin,

I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. As a senior 2 student , I have so much experience to share with you. High school life is full of challenges. Making good use of your tme will be of great benefit to efficient study. It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class. High school life can be very colorful as well. I suggest you participate in some meaningful activities , such as sports and voluntary work to develop yourself properly and thoroughly .At the same time, I hope that you will get on well with your classmates and help each other. The coming three years will be the most beautiful time in your life. I believe that with your efforts , you’ll make it fruitful and wonderful.

Yours Sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

本文書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇電子郵件：假設你是高二學生李華，你的表弟王林即將要上高中。請你給他寫一封郵件告訴他如何盡快地適用高中生活以及如何與新同學相處融洽等。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關鍵詞，如：a senior high school student（一名高中生）；High school life is full of challenges（高中生活充滿了挑戰(zhàn)）；take notes in class（上課記筆記）；participate in some meaningful activities（參加一些有意義的活動）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。