Question

5．此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤．對(duì)標(biāo)有題號(hào)的每一行作出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤．在該行右邊
板線上畫一個(gè)勾（√）：如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：
   此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
   此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
   此行錯(cuò)一個(gè)詞：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
   注意：原行沒有錯(cuò)的不要改．
Last week，our class have a meeting to discuss where to go for       76．have 改為had
our spring outing．We came up with some idea such as going          77．idea 改為 ideas
boating，climbing a mountain and go to an amusement park．          78．go 改為going
Finally，we decided to go mountain climbing．The next day，79．√
we set off earlier in the morning．While climbing the mountain，80．earlier 改為early
we enjoyed the warmly sunshine and the beautiful view．                  81．warmly改為 warm
However，when we reached to the top，we were shocked to see        82．去掉第一個(gè) to
bottles and banana peels around．Then we started to pick up．        83．pick 后加them
Afterwards，we put the rubbish into the nearby recycled bins           84．recycled 改為 recycling
respectively．We were tired and happy．                                            85．a(chǎn)nd改為but．

Answer 1

分析 上周我們班開會(huì)討論去什么地方春游．我們想到了很多方式，劃船，爬山，去游樂園等等．最終我們決定去爬山．第二天我們一大早就出發(fā)了，爬山時(shí)，我們沐浴著陽光，欣賞沿途的風(fēng)景．可當(dāng)我們到達(dá)山頂時(shí)，我們被滿地的瓶子和香蕉皮驚呆了．我們開始撿垃圾，把它們放到循環(huán)利用的垃圾箱．我們很累但很開心．

解答 Last week，our class have a meeting to discuss where to go for             
                                had
our spring outing．We came up with some idea such as going               
                                                              ideas
boating，climbing a mountain and go to an amusement park．              
                                                 going
Finally，we decided to go mountain climbing．The next day，

we set off earlier in the morning．While climbing the mountain，
                early
we enjoyed the warmly sunshine and the beautiful view．                  
                       warm
However，when we reached to the top，we were shocked to see        
                                        去掉
bottles and banana peels around．Then we started to pick∧up．      
                                                                                 加them
Afterwards，we put the rubbish into the nearby recycled bins           
                                                                      recycling
respectively．We were tired andhappy．                                       
                                          but
76．have改為had．文章講述的是過去的事，要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài)．
77．idea改為ideas．題干表達(dá)的是一些想法，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
78．go改為going．題干中是在such as后表示列舉，要用動(dòng)名詞．
79．正確．
80．earlier改為early．題干沒有表示比較，不能用比較級(jí)．
81．warmly改為warm．題干修飾的是名詞sunshine，要用形容詞．
82．to去掉．reach是及物動(dòng)詞，表示到達(dá)，不用介詞．
83．加them．題干中pick up表示撿起，要補(bǔ)上賓語．
84．recycled改為recycling．題干中是修飾名詞bins，要用現(xiàn)在分詞構(gòu)成的形容詞，表示事物的特指或?qū)傩裕?br />85．a(chǎn)nd改為but．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，不是并列．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．