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【題目】我校決心建設(shè)“節(jié)約型校園”，請結(jié)合我校用水、用電、用紙的情況。以 “How to Build an Economized Campus”為題，寫一篇作文，談?wù)勛约旱南敕ā?/span>

文章須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

（1）節(jié)電：及時關(guān)閉電燈、電腦等用電設(shè)備

（2）節(jié)水：隨手關(guān)閉水龍頭（tap）；廢水利用

（3）節(jié)紙：紙張再利用

補(bǔ)充：自己日常生活所感所為

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100—120字，短文標(biāo)題，開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。

2.內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文貫通。

How to Build an Economized Campus

Our school is aiming to build an economized campus. It is everybody’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Build an Economized Campus

Our government is aiming to build an economized campus. It is everybody’s duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

Recently, the statistics in the report of one certain school in two school terms suggests that the expenses of electricity, water and paper are surprisingly large and growing rapidly, which draws our attention.

As a common member of society, we must keep the following points in our minds. Firstly, make sure that the lights and all the other electric facilities are turned off when we finish our work and leave the room. Secondly, try to form the habit of turning off the tap after it is used and the wide water can be reused for more purposes before being thrown into sewers. Thirdly, save paper as much as possible in our everyday life. It is even better to reuse it.

In a word, if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to reduce waste, we can make contributions to an economized campus.

【解析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一篇日常感悟。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一篇日常感悟：我校決心建設(shè)“節(jié)約型校園”，請結(jié)合我校用水、用電、用紙的情況。以 “How to Build an Economized Campus”為題，寫一篇作文，談?wù)勛约旱南敕�。文章須包括以下要點(diǎn)：（1）節(jié)電：及時關(guān)閉電燈、電腦等用電設(shè)備（2）節(jié)水：隨手關(guān)閉水龍頭（tap）；廢水利用（3）節(jié)紙：紙張再利用。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：the expenses of electricity,（電的費(fèi)用）；draws our attention.（引起某人的注意）；make sure(確保)；turned off（關(guān)掉）；In a word,（總而言之）；pay much attention to （關(guān)注）；take actions（采取行動）；make contributions to（為---做出貢獻(xiàn)）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，魚片連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。