Question

【題目】假定你是李華，國(guó)外著名學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng) Student Tube邀請(qǐng)你發(fā)帖分享你平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)方式。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 多讀多寫；2. 合理安排時(shí)間；3. 其他方式（自擬）。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear friends,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

I’d like to share my own learning experience with you, as I hope it can be useful to you.

First of all, do more reading and writing. Reading is the key to opening your eyes, while writing is a helpful way to make good use of what you have learned. Besides, make a reasonable study schedule. Though study comes first, you need relaxation as well. In order not to be tired, I have been actively taking part in after- school activities. By doing so, I can spare time to develop a strong social ability. Last but not least, I prefer studying by myself, which gives me the chance to succeed in solving hard problems.

In a word, just remember that developing your own learning style is the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，分享平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)方式。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱：第一人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法

要點(diǎn)：

1. 多讀多寫；2. 合理安排時(shí)間；3. 其他方式（自擬）。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be useful to；reading and writing；the key to；make good use of；reasonable；study schedule；relaxation；take part in；after- school activities；spare time to do sth.；social ability；prefer；chance；succeed in doing；learning style；In a word；as well等

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’d like to share my own learning experience with you

2. Reading is the key to opening your eyes, while writing is a helpful way to make good use of what you have learned.

3. Though study comes first, you need relaxation as well.

4. I have been actively taking part in after- school activities.

5. I can spare time to develop a strong social ability.

6. I prefer studying by myself, which gives me the chance to succeed in solving hard problems.

7. Developing your own learning style is the best.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all；Last but not least；

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Besides；and；

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：Though；while+從句；

4.表因果關(guān)系：so；as等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改