Question

【題目】假定你是李華，得知你的英國留學生朋友Peter在CCTV舉辦的《中國詩詞大會》(The Chines Poetry Competition)決賽中失利。請你給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 給予安慰和鼓勵；

2. 愿意提供幫助。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)80-100詞；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m sorry to know that you were knocked out in the finals of the Chinese Poetry Competition last week. I’m writing to express my sincere concern for you.

I understand how you are feeling. You made careful preparations in advance and tried your best, so there is nothing to regret. As a saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.” As a matter of fact, you can learn a valuable lesson from this experience. I do hope that you won’t lose heart and will keep on learning Chinese. There are many opportunities to show your talent in the future. If you keep on trying, you are sure to win in the next competition.

Don’t hesitate to let me know if you need further help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文為提綱類應(yīng)用文寫作。

本題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份給英國留學生朋友Peter寫封郵件。寫作背景： Peter在CCTV舉辦的《中國詩詞大會》決賽中失利。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括： 1.給予安慰和鼓勵； 2.愿意提供幫助。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要富有變化。