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2．隨著越來(lái)越多的農(nóng)村勞動(dòng)力進(jìn)入城市，在農(nóng)村隨之產(chǎn)生了一個(gè)特殊的未成年人群體--留守兒童．近日，你校即將開展幫助留守兒童的志愿者活動(dòng)．假如你是校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專版的編輯，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的表格提示寫一封倡議書，向全班同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，關(guān)注留守兒童．
提示：
1．現(xiàn)狀：農(nóng)村有很多留守兒童．
2．提倡：1．與留守兒童交朋友；2．在生活方面關(guān)心照顧他們；3．在學(xué)習(xí)方面幫助他們．
要求：
1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右（文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．根據(jù)所給信息可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：留守兒童left-behind children、
參考短語(yǔ)、句型：take care of，make friends with sb．，invite sb．to do sth．，help…with…
Dear classmates，
There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 本文是話題類的作文，要求寫一封倡議書．向全班同學(xué)發(fā)出倡議，關(guān)注留守兒童．寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)列出要求明確，故要完成寫作任務(wù)，務(wù)必把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚．
亮點(diǎn)句型一：I think we should do something to help them．我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該做些事情來(lái)幫助他們．本句中we should do something to help them是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that．
亮點(diǎn)句型二：It is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us．這不僅對(duì)留守兒童有好處，而且對(duì)我們也很有幫助．not only…but also是并列連詞，本句中并列表語(yǔ)good和helpful．

解答 Dear classmates，
     There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．Their parents can't take good care of them．I think we should do something to help them．（亮點(diǎn)句型一）First，we can make friends with them，for example，inviting them to our school or writing to them．Second，we are able to help them to have a better life by giving them daily products．Finally，we can help them with their lessons．
    This activity is very meaningful． It is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us．（亮點(diǎn)句型二）
Yours，
Editor

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．