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2．假定你是Jack，你的中國朋友李華作為交換生剛到英國學(xué)習(xí)不久，他被邀請參加一個(gè)英國家庭的家庭宴會，他不知道該如何做才合適，請你給他通過電子郵件提出一些建議：
1．穿著要精干   
2．按時(shí)到達(dá)  
3．帶上小禮物 （一瓶酒，一盒巧克力或鮮花 
4．就餐時(shí)要注意禮貌舉止，不要喝太多的酒，不要大聲喧嘩
5．就餐后不要逗留太久         
6．一兩天后給主人寫答謝信
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
      2．文章開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
Dear Li Hua，
How is it going？Glad to receive your letter again．As for the family dinner party，I will give you some advice as follows．
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Yours sincerely
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇書信類作文，要點(diǎn)和信的開頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出．我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略，故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多．需要注意不要偏離文章中心．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
  高級詞匯 out of politeness （出于禮貌）  express your gratitude to their hospitality （向主人表達(dá)感謝）

解答 Dear Li Hua，
How is it going？Glad to receive your letter again．As for the family dinner party，I will give you some advice as follows．
As it is a formal party，you had better dress smartly．（高分句式一  ） You should arrive on time with some small gifts such as a bottle of wine，a box of chocolate or just a bunch of flowers．At dinner，do remember to mind your manners．Please don't drink too much and don't speak loudly．After the dinner，out of politeness，you should stay for a while to chat with other guests and the host，but don't overstay your welcome．One or two days later，it would be better to write a letter of thanks to the host to express your gratitude to their hospitality （好客）．（高分句式二）
Wish you all the best!
Yours sincerely
Jack

點(diǎn)評 本文屬于書信類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．