分析 本文是半開(kāi)放性作文.在第二點(diǎn)上可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(描述參加此次夏令營(yíng)的收獲).半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題,并有部分的文字提示.給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大.對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力.在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭.同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體,如besides,further,last but not least等.在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.
亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明:范文的高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用較好,如非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it;以及who gave me lots of assistance.另外串聯(lián)詞的使用也很合理,如Besides等.
解答 Dear Monica,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your company while I was on this summer camp,which was an unforgettable experience for me and I also benefited a lot from it.(高分句式一 表達(dá)感謝)
Through visiting American universities,I got a good knowledge of American universities-tourist attractions in some way,which broadened my horizon and introduced me to more about American culture.(高分句式二)Besides,during the summer camp,I made some American friends,just like you,who gave me lots of assistance.Moreover,in an environment exposed to English language,my English listening and speaking skills got improved greatly.(高分句式三)(個(gè)人收獲)
Would you like to join the summer camp in China next summer?I'll be you best guide and you can experience traditional Chinese culture,and enjoy tasty Chinese food,etc.I'm looking forward to your coming.(發(fā)出邀請(qǐng))
Yours,
LiHua.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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