Question

10．請按照要求用英文回復(fù)這個帖子：
With the college entrance examination approaching，quite a few students are suffering mental problems，such as worrying about making progress in their studies．It does great harm to their studies and health．What can we do to help them？
內(nèi)容要點：1．同意并表示擔(dān)憂；
2．考前心理焦慮的表現(xiàn)；
3．提出合理的建議．
注意：1．可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；
2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．詞數(shù)100左右．
I can't agree more with what you said．It's a fact that quite a few students are suffering mental problems．（高分句型一）It is really worrying．
These students are so worried about the college entrance examination that they are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence．They always feel stressed and easily get angry and therefore they can't get along well with others．（高分句型二）
As a matter of fact，there're many ways to deal with their mental problems，such as turning to their teachers for help，communicating with their friends or classmates and so on．（高分句型三）Above all，they need to develop a positive attitude towards their studies and life．Only in this way will they keep in normal mental health and study happily．．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求列出心理焦慮的各種現(xiàn)象，使用一般現(xiàn)在時的時態(tài)和第三人稱．在提出應(yīng)該采取對策的時候，又屬于議論文的格式． 
本文要點：1．列舉學(xué)生心理焦慮的現(xiàn)象：部分學(xué)生擔(dān)憂考試成績；一些學(xué)生無法入睡；有些失去信心；有些學(xué)生與他人無法相處；2．解決的對策：向老師求助；對于別人交流；對待生活有積極的態(tài)度； 
在寫作的時候要靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)．語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料．同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．考生必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等． 
【亮點說明】
本文的亮點是連接詞的使用，如：as a matter of fact，first of all，Second和last but not least這些連詞讓文章成為一個整體．另外句中使用了一些高級詞匯：get along well with…，develop attitudes towards…等等． 
It's a fact that quite a few students are suffering mental problems．（高分句型一）
They always feel stressed and easily get angry and therefore they can't get along well with others．（高分句型二）
As a matter of fact，there're many ways to deal with their mental problems，such as turning to their teachers for help，communicating with their friends or classmates and so on．（高分句型三）

解答        I can't agree more with what you said． It's a fact that quite a few students are suffering mental problems．（高分句型一）It is really worrying．
      These students are so worried about the college entrance examination that they are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence．They always feel stressed and easily get angry and therefore they can't get along well with others．（高分句型二）
      As a matter of fact，there're many ways to deal with their mental problems，such as turning to their teachers for help，communicating with their friends or classmates and so on．（高分句型三）Above all，they need to develop a positive attitude towards their studies and life．Only in this way will they keep in normal mental health and study happily．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．