Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你收到了美國筆友彼得寄來的最新英文小說。請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1）小說收到；
2）回贈(zèng)禮物；
3）禮物意義；
4）邀請(qǐng)來華。
注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,
……
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm glad to receive the novel.Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time.This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life.

I know you're interested in Chinese festivals,and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you.Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics,which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere.I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China.

Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。考生在寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1）本篇是一篇回信，回信的大致內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出。在書寫時(shí)要注意書信的格式

2）要點(diǎn)要齊全，對(duì)感謝、禮物的意義以及邀請(qǐng)要進(jìn)行一一描述。但是不要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

3）根據(jù)要點(diǎn)，先組此句；句式豐富，避免單詞。

4）注意文章要通過合理的順序和句型作為支撐。否則會(huì)顯得說服力不夠，內(nèi)容不夠豐滿。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】1）文章采用了“and 、therefore、which”等連接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

2）文章使用了“be glad to、expect for”等句式短語。

3）which引導(dǎo)的定語從句：

Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics,which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere.