Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合生活中的一個事例，就“樂觀”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。
Optimism always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure. That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenges and disappointments in very different ways.
注意：
1、無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
2、除詩歌之外，文體不限；
3、內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個事例；
4、文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
5、詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Optimism is important in all aspects of our life.If you can change your mind from pessimism，you can change your life.

Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two，I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself.I kept practicing speaking，listening，reading and writing.When I was fed up with reading or writing，I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories，jokes and humors or seeing English films.When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing，I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs.By this means，I always made myself cheerful and optimistic，full of splendid and colorful dreams of future.I kept practicing.Gradually，I made progress in my English.

Thanks to the optimism，I have become one of the top students in my class by now.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文用了一些常見的短語：Up to直到，give in屈服，be fed up with 對…厭倦， entertained myself自娛自樂， have trouble in doing做…有困難， make progress 取得進步，Thanks to多虧了。

考點：考查開放式書面表達