Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合一則人生勵(lì)志故事，用英語寫一篇短文。

Regardless of what happened yesterday and what may or may not happen tomorrow, the present moment is where we are.

注意：

①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

④詞數(shù)為120左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Regarded as a lecture master, Nick Vujicic, without arms and legs by birth, is the very person I’ve been admiring.

Disabled as he is, he has proved to the world that he can live as rich and full a life as a normal person. He never sat around feeling sorry for himself, nor did he worry about his future. On the contrary, owing to his optimism and perseverance, not only has he succeeded in caring for himself and playing sports, but he also graduated with distinction and completed a double degree. What amazes and inspires me most is that he is keen on delivering speeches and has even started a non-profit organization, Life Without Limbs, to help others like him attain their ambitions.

On his life journey, Nick has sought after the best himself despite his disabilities. Similarly, We are what we are, not what we were or what we will be. Cherish the present, develop our limitless potential, and we’ll also lead a more meaningful life.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文。開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】Regarded as a lecture master, Nick Vujicic, without arms and legs by birth, is the very person I’ve been admiring. 這句話用過去分詞做狀語和定語從句， Disabled as he is, he has proved to the world that he can live as rich and full a life as a normal person. 這句話用了as的倒裝句，He never sat around feeling sorry for himself, nor did he worry about his future. 這句話也是倒裝句，On the contrary, owing to his optimism and perseverance, not only has he succeeded in caring for himself and playing sports, but he also graduated with distinction and completed a double degree. 這句話用了not only…，but also….de 結(jié)構(gòu)，What amazes and inspires me most is that he is keen on delivering speeches and has even started a non-profit organization, Life Without Limbs, to help others like him attain their ambitions. 這句話用了主語從句和賓語從句， Similarly, We are what we are, not what we were or what we will be.這句話用了表語從句 Cherish the present, develop our limitless potential, and we’ll also lead a more meaningful life. 這是“祈使句+and+簡(jiǎn)單句”的句型。

考點(diǎn)：考查開放式作文