Question

【題目】假定你是李華，正在負(fù)責(zé)策劃“綠色校園”活動(dòng)（Green Campus Campaign），請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)筆友Henry寫(xiě)一封郵件，向他介紹此次活動(dòng)的目的、內(nèi)容，并征求他的建議。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

Dear Henry,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Henry,

How are you doing? I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.

We plan to organize this campaign like this. First, a series of lectures will be given, introducing ways to build a low-carbon school life. This will be followed by a discussion about ways of saving water, paper, and electricity at school. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine? I wonder if you could give me some practical advice as I know you’ve organized such activities.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫(xiě)一封郵件給你的英國(guó)筆友Henry，向他介紹“綠色校園”活動(dòng)的目的、內(nèi)容，并征求他的建議。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 介紹“綠色校園”活動(dòng)的目的、內(nèi)容；

2. 尋求建議。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

seek sb.’s help；arouse awareness of；environmental protection；plan to do sth.；a series of；put …into practice；daily routine

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’m writing to seek your help, because we are to start a Green Campus Campaign to arouse students’ awareness of environmental protection.

2. We plan to organize this campaign like this.

3. a series of lectures will be given,

4. But how can we put them into practice and make them our daily routine?

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實(shí)：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改