Question

【題目】假如你是李明，在過去一周你在英國參加中學(xué)生文化交流活動，期間一直住在你的英國好友Peter家，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)回國。請你根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封感謝信。要點包括：
1).表達感激之情；
2).回憶各種收獲；
3).發(fā)出邀請。
注意：1).詞數(shù)100左右；
2).可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3).開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Peter,
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldn't have enjoyed it so much.

Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beautiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. What's more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.

I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李明的身份給英國好友Peter寫一封感謝信，感謝他在你去英國參加中學(xué)生文化交流活動時給予自己的幫助。寫作要點已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文。文章要使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主的時態(tài)。要點：1.表達感激之情；2.回憶各種收獲；3.發(fā)出邀請。在寫作時，注意書信的格式以及串聯(lián)過渡用語What's more,；同時盡量使用熟悉的詞匯及短語，尤其注意不要出現(xiàn)中國式英語，并在力所能及的范圍之內(nèi)使用復(fù)合句或者諺語，增加獲得高分的可能性。