【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤， 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(A),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.

Dear Ms. Wood,

I was a guest who stayed in your hotel a week ago. First of all, I want to express my sincere thanks for your good service which makes my stay in Australia more enjoyable. Therefore, you can do better in some aspects.

To begin with, I found out only one Chinese dish on the menu, that gave me a big surprise. Is it possible for you to provide Chinese dishes with more variety? In addition, it took me long time to find the emergency exit. Please make the signs well-marking. Finally, the clerk at the front desk could be more patiently. When asking about where to find the nearest swimming pool, she seemed rather annoyed.

I do hope you will take their advice into consideration. Thanks for your time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】1.makes→made 2.Therefore→However 3.去掉out 4.that→which 5.variety→varieties 6.long 前加a 7.well-marking →well-marked 8.patiently→patient 9.asking→asked 10.their→my

【解析】

本文是應(yīng)用文，是一封書信。作者寫信給度假的酒店提出的一些改進(jìn)的建議。

1.考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上一句的時(shí)間狀語a week ago可知，是敘述過去的事情，應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)。故makes改為made。

2.考查連詞。上一句說“你們的良好服務(wù)使我在澳大利亞的逗留更加愉快”，下一句說“你可以在某些方面做得更好”，兩句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系，不是因果關(guān)系，Therefore是表示因果關(guān)系，故Therefore改為However。

3.考查動(dòng)詞詞義辨析。短語find out 意為：找出（真相），查明（事實(shí)）；find意為“發(fā)現(xiàn)”；根據(jù)句意應(yīng)用find，故去掉out。

4.考查定語從句。句意：我發(fā)現(xiàn)菜單上只有一道中國菜，這讓我很驚訝。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)，后半句前面有逗號，是非限制性定語從句，用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，指代前面的整個(gè)句子。that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，故that改為which。

5.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)句意，是“更多種類的菜肴”， variety是可數(shù)名詞，此處應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)，故variety改為varieties。

6.考查固定短語。 a long time“很長時(shí)間”，是固定短語，故long前加a。

7.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意： 請把標(biāo)牌做好。此處是“make + 賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語”結(jié)構(gòu)，賓語signs和well-mark之間為邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，應(yīng)該用過去分詞做賓語補(bǔ)足語，故well-marking改為well-marked。

8.考查形容詞。在be動(dòng)詞后應(yīng)該用形容詞作表語，故patiently改為patient。

9.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：當(dāng)她被問去哪里找最近的游泳池時(shí)，她似乎很生氣。ask和邏輯主語也就是主句的主語she之間為被動(dòng)的關(guān)系，相當(dāng)于when she was asked…，因此用過去分詞形式。故asking改為asked。

10.考查代詞。句意：我真的希望你能考慮我的建議。根據(jù)上文，應(yīng)該是作者提出建議；主語是I，相應(yīng)的用形容詞性物主代詞my。故their改為my。

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