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【題目】 短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I always think my mother is also your good friend. When I lose my first tooth, when I found a friend, and when I fell off from my bike, she was there. She was proud when I succeeded but supportive when I failed. She always listened me. She seemed to know when I was asking for advices and when I just needed a good cry. We actual shared experiences, hopes, sadness and fears. She made me felt that my opinions were never small and silly. She never forgot to tell me what she believed in me. Now my mother is facing with some difficulties in life. I want to tell her everything will be OK and I believe in her, too.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】your →my

【2】lose→lost

【3】去掉 from

【4】but→and

【5】me前加to

【6】advices→advice

【7】actual →actually

【8】felt →feel

【9】what→that 或者刪除what

【10】facing→faced或者去掉with

【解析】

試題分析：把媽媽當成好朋友，分享生活中的喜怒哀樂。

【1】your →my 句意：我總是把我的媽媽看作是我的好朋友。故把your →my。

【2】lose→lost 句意：當我找掉第一顆牙的時候，當我找到朋友的時候，當我從自行車上摔下來的時候，她都在我身邊�？芍�用一般過去時態(tài)，故把lose→lost。

【3】去掉 from fall from從---落下來，故去掉 from。

【4】but→and 句意：我成功時她是自豪的，我失敗時她是給予幫助的�？芍�此處表示并列關系，故把but→and。

【5】me前加to listen to sb.聽某人說，故在me前加to。

【6】advices→advice advice是不可數(shù)名詞，故把advices→advice。

【7】actual →actually 副詞修飾動詞，故把actual →actually。

【8】felt →feel make sb. do sth.使某人做某事，故把felt →feel。

【9】what→that 或者刪除what tell后面跟賓語從句，從句中不缺成分，引導詞只起引導作用，故把what→that 或者刪除what。

【10】facing→faced或者去掉with facing sth./be faced with sth.面臨著---，面對著---，故把facing→faced或者去掉with。

【名師點撥】

1. 動詞不定式作賓語補足語

encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵某人做某事；want sb. to do 想讓某人做某事；invite sb. to do邀請某人做某事； ask sb. to do 請求某人做某事；order sb. to do命令某人做某事； tell sb. to do告訴某人做某事；force sb. to do 強迫某人做某事；allow sb. to do允許某人做某事； forbid sb. to do 禁止某人做某事；persuade sb. to do 勸說某人做某事。

2.不帶to 的動詞不定式作賓語補足語

have/make/see/watch/hear/let/notice/observe/feel/look at/listen to sb. do sth.

注意：help sb. (to) do sth.

溫馨提示：不帶to 的動詞不定式作賓語補足語，但是變成被動語態(tài)時要把to加上。He made me feel at home. （主動語態(tài)）I was made to feel at home.（被動語態(tài)）