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2．上海博物館擬舉辦一次名畫展，現(xiàn)就展出場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）征集公眾意見，假設(shè)你是王敏，給上海博物館寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法．你的信必須滿足以下要求：
1．簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇；
2．說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進(jìn)行對比）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封信，就上海博物館將要舉辦的一次畫展場所（博物館還是社區(qū)圖書館）發(fā)表自己的想法．
寫作時人稱以第一和第三人稱為主，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．簡述你寫信的目的及你對場所的選擇； 2．說明你的理由（從便利性，專業(yè)性等方面對這兩個場所進(jìn)行對比）．
重要短語：hear from…（收到…來信），as follows（如下），in terms of （就…而言），have advantages over（比…有優(yōu)越性），be located in （位于…），be available to（可得到的，可利用的），after all （畢竟），be familiar to（為…所熟悉），with regard to（就…而言），be set in（以…為場景），preserve sth（保存某物），in a general sense（在一般意義上講），of no match（比不上）；be qualified （能勝任）；to sum up（總之），．
【高分句型一】
1．I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum．
此處是由"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語從句，解釋說明名詞"opinion"的具體內(nèi)容．
【高分句型二】
2．it is located in the People's Square，which is the center of the city．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，關(guān)系代詞"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內(nèi)容．
【高分句型三】
3．Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country．
此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的表語從句，主語為"Another advantage"，謂語動詞為"is"，表語為"that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country"．

解答 Dear Sir or Madam：
 I have heard from the newspaper that you，the Shanghai Museum，are planning to organize a famous painting exhibition．And you are now collecting suggestions about whether to hold it in your museum or the art gallery．I am now writing to express my opinion that the exhibition should be held in the museum．【高分句型一】My reasons are as follows．（寫信的目的及對場所的選擇）
 In terms of convenience，the museum has more advantages over the gallery．First，it is located in the People's Square，which is the center of the city．【高分句型一】So people can enjoy convenient transportation such as the subway line 1，2 and 8，which are available to people from nearly every district．【高分句型二】It saves the visitors a lot of time and trouble of traffic jam．Another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country．【高分句型三】After all the Shanghai Museum is a landmark of our city familiar to nearly every Chinese．（理由：便利性）
With regard to the professional function，though it seems natural that an art exhibition be set in the gallery，in a more general sense，I think the museum has more advanced facilities to make the exhibition successful and to preserve the paintings well．As we know，the museum has successfully held many national and international exhibitions and its advertising and organizing experience is of no match； also its staff is qualified and professional．（理由：專業(yè)性）
To sum up，I am sure the show will be fantastic if it is held in Shanghai Museum．（結(jié)論）

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．