Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你的英國朋友Peter本周六即將結(jié)束在中國的旅行，乘飛機(jī)回英國。你因有事無法按原定計劃去機(jī)場為他送行。請給Peter寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表達(dá)款意；

2.說明不能送行的原因。

注意：1.詞數(shù) 100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.郵件的格式已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I’m terribly sorry for my not being able to see you off at the airport this Saturday as I have promised.

My English teacher Mrs Li has asked me to help her make some preparations for the English Speaking Contest to be held this weekend. I have just been informed of this plan, and as the class monitor, I just feel responsible and I have to do this job. So I am afraid I can’t be present at the airport.

How I wish I could have the chance to talk with you once more about the happy days we spent together before you go away. Wish you a safe journey.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生因有事無法去機(jī)場為朋友Peter送行寫封郵件，告知他不能送行的原因。

第一步：審題。

體裁：郵件應(yīng)用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時為主。

要點(diǎn)：1 對無法去機(jī)場送行道歉

2 不能送行的具體原因

3 表達(dá)自己的祝福

結(jié)構(gòu)布局：

第一段，告知朋友Peter無法按原計劃去機(jī)場給他送行，并表示抱歉。

第二段，不能送行的原因：在上周球隊訓(xùn)練中發(fā)生意外受傷住院,這周日計劃手術(shù)治療。

第三段，表達(dá)自己的祝福：希望回國之后能繼續(xù)保持聯(lián)系，預(yù)祝飛行一切順利。

第二步：列重點(diǎn)詞語，詞組（注意好詞的使用）

如：see sb. off, promise, by accident, in hospital, be scheduled to, have an operation on, keep in touch with等

第三步：連詞成句（注意好句型的使用，如非謂語動詞，復(fù)合句，注意拼寫和時態(tài)問題）

如：I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am not able to see you off at the airport this Saturday as what I have promised to you等

第四步：連句成篇（注意銜接詞的使用）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…, Finally, In the end, At last;

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also)

3.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡。

第五步：潤色修改。