Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tony對(duì)中醫(yī)文化很感興趣，發(fā)來(lái)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)中醫(yī)的事情，請(qǐng)你回他一封郵件，回答他的問(wèn)題，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 中醫(yī)的歷史、地位；

2. 中醫(yī)的優(yōu)勢(shì)（療效好、副作用少、價(jià)格低）等。

參考詞匯：中醫(yī) Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM)

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tony,

I am more than delighted to hear that you take an intense interest in Chinese culture, especially Traditional Chinese Medicine. The TCM, as an important part of Chinese culture, has been attracting attention from all over the world.

The TCM, with its unique diagnostic methods, long history and remarkable effects, has been used to treat cancer and other serious diseases for more than five thousand years. Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people. Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.

In a word, the TCM has made great contributions to the development of Chinese health care. Hope you can have a better understanding of it.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封郵件。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。你的美國(guó)朋友Tony對(duì)中醫(yī)文化很感興趣，發(fā)來(lái)郵件向你詢問(wèn)有關(guān)中醫(yī)的事情，請(qǐng)你回他一封郵件，回答他的問(wèn)題，內(nèi)容包括：1. 中醫(yī)的歷史、地位；2. 中醫(yī)的優(yōu)勢(shì)（療效好、副作用少、價(jià)格低）等。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，表示感謝，并說(shuō)明自己的狀況。第二段，學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容和方式；鍛煉方式；第三段，感想。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ): be delighted to, take an intense interest in, attract attention, In a word, made great contributions to.

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子: 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)Unlike the Western Medicine, the TCM has fewer side effects, making it much more reliable for most Chinese people； 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞和定語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用 Above all, compared with high fees of the Western Medicine, the TCM has a more reasonable price that ordinary people can afford.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:Above all，In a word.

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。