Question

【題目】假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知Banks夫婦的西餐館在登廣告招聘兼職服務員。請寫一封電子郵件應聘。

內容包括:

1.發(fā)郵件的目的。

2.自我介紹。

3.應聘理由(可開闊視野、交到新朋友等)。

4.表達自己的希望。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mr. & Mrs. Banks,

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Regards

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. & Mrs. Banks,

I'm Li Hua, who has just graduated from high school this summer. I know that you want some part-timers for your newly opened Western restaurant on the Internet and I'd like to be part of your team.

I've been learning English for 10 years, and I can express myself fluently. Besides, I'm diligent and healthy with a nice character, which helps me get along well with people of different backgrounds. What matters most is the opportunity to expand my horizons as well as make more new friends. And it is the sense of commitment that I am eager to raise through such a valuable experience that inspires me to make this request.

An early reply at your convenience will be much appreciated if my qualifications meet with your approval.

Regards

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一封電子郵件給為自己西餐館登廣告招聘兼職服務員的Banks夫婦，應聘服務員這一職位。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1. 發(fā)郵件的目的；

2. 自我介紹；

3. .應聘理由(可開闊視野、交到新朋友等)；

4.表達自己的希望。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

graduate from；get along well with sb.；expand one’s horizons；be eager to do sth.；inspire sb. to do sth.

第三步：連詞成句

1. I'm Li Hua, who has just graduated from high school this summer.

2. which helps me get along well with people of different backgrounds.

3. What matters most is the opportunity to expand my horizons as well as make more new friends.

4. And it is the sense of commitment that I am eager to raise through such a valuable experience that inspires me to make this request.

(根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤色修改