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假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，看到同學(xué)們互贈(zèng)紙質(zhì)新年賀卡，認(rèn)為這會(huì)造成浪費(fèi)和污染。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文向校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿，建議大家使用電子賀卡（e-cards）。
1．方便快捷：電子郵件傳送：      2．省錢(qián)：網(wǎng)站免費(fèi)下載；
3．內(nèi)容非富：可增加音樂(lè)動(dòng)畫(huà)：    4．環(huán)保：不會(huì)造成污染浪費(fèi)。
參考詞匯： 動(dòng)畫(huà)animation
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One possible version
New Year’s Day is drawing near and as usual many of my classmates begin to send paper cards to each other, friends and family. I think it is really a waste of money and it can also cause pollution. So I suggest using e-cards instead of paper-cards. First, it is very convenient to send e-cards. It just takes a click and our friends will receive them in one or two seconds. Second, free e-cards can help us save money. Third, with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. Last but not least, e-cards are environmentally friendly as no real materials are used. Since they have so many advantages, why not have a try?

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語(yǔ)提示的提綱類(lèi)作文。成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、文章內(nèi)容要齊全；（1）方便快捷：電子郵件傳送；（2）省錢(qián)：網(wǎng)站免費(fèi)下載；（3）內(nèi)容非富：可增加音樂(lè)動(dòng)畫(huà)；（4）環(huán)保：不會(huì)造成污染浪費(fèi)。2.時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3.人稱：一、三人稱；4.適當(dāng)使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、句型和短語(yǔ)，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞和插入語(yǔ)使文章自然、流暢。
【范文亮點(diǎn)】1.使用了高級(jí)詞匯：environmentally，短語(yǔ)Last but not least  2.高級(jí)句型：with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. it is very convenient to send e-cards