Question

【題目】Directions : Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

假如你是Tom,在網上訂了一款MP3作為生日禮物送給好朋友，但收到的MP3卻存在質 量問題。請你給銷售經理寫一封投訴信。內容包括:

1. MP3有質量問題；

2. 給你造成的損失；

3. 你的合理要求。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear manager，

I’m writing to tell you about the MP3 I bought last week from your company on the Internet, which was intended for my good friend as a birthday gift.

When I opened the delivery, I was surprised to find the wrapping paper broken. What was worse, I find the MP3 doesn’t work, no matter how many measures I have taken.

With reference to my order No. 1314, there is no doubt that the MP3 you delivered really comes from your company, whose poor quality made me very disappointed, and it is the poor MP3 that made me suffer a great loss from it. Anyway, it cost me 200 yuan, which I saved for nearly half a year. To some extent, the broken MP3 has not only brought me great economic loss but also lessened my trust as a consumer.

As my friend’s birthday is drawing near, I am anxious to know whether a new MP3 can be redelivered as soon as possible. Please take my case into deep consideration rather than turn a blind eye to my requirement. I would appreciate it very much if much attention could be paid to my requirement!

Yours truly,

Tom

【解析】

這是一篇應用文寫作。

第1步：根據提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件；假如你是Tom,在網上訂了一款MP3作為生日禮物送給好朋友，但收到的MP3卻存在質 量問題。請你給銷售經理寫一封投訴信。內容包括:1. MP3有質量問題；2. 給你造成的損失；3. 你的合理要求。

第2步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：be intended for（打算為……所用），delivery（快遞），measures（方法）；With reference to（考慮到），a great loss（巨大的損失）等。

第3步：根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。