【題目】書面表達

手機本來是方便聯(lián)系的，但是很多年輕人卻將手機當(dāng)成消磨時間的娛樂工具。他們整天低頭發(fā)微信、玩游戲，被人們戲稱為“低頭族”。請為學(xué)校專刊寫一篇投稿，對這種情況進行分析，并發(fā)表你的看法，文章中需包括下面的要點：

1．人們對手機產(chǎn)生依賴，疏遠(yuǎn)家人和親友；

2．低頭玩手機甚至引發(fā)交通事故，給家人帶來痛苦。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3．參考詞匯：低頭族Smartphone Addicts

【答案】

One possible version:

It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing，twittering or chatting using their smartphones．It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey．

They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads．This is very harmful．On the one hand，they keep away from their friends or family．On the other hand，being busy with their smartphones can cause accidents，which brings them more pains than pleasure．

As a matter of fact，they can take up reading to kill the time during their trips．Reading books or newspapers can also enrich their knowledge．The pleasure from reading is a pleasant experience they can’t have from using smartphones．

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于討論類文章，根據(jù)提示信息來說明自己的觀點。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、注意審題，仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、要依據(jù)提示的觀點，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫，不要漏掉要點。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如It is a common sight to see many young people engaged in emailing，twittering or chatting using their smartphones．使用了It is ...to do sth的固定句式；They are called Smartphone Addicts，who are buried in using their smartphones or laptops without raising their heads．使用了定語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量短語和句型，如It might be the best choice to kill time when they are on dull journey．使用了名詞的最高級形式， keep away from ，遠(yuǎn)離......；運用了許多連接詞，如On the one hand，On the other hand，固定的連接詞，使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。

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