分析 考查提綱式作文:以李華的名義給你的英國(guó)筆友Bill寫信介紹霧霾(smog)天氣的情況,考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示,認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系,這篇文章的提綱很詳細(xì),根據(jù)所給提綱,以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力,靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí),采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來,注意主次分明,詳略得當(dāng).語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔.根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料.同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有一定的連貫性.考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況,有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文用了一些常見的短語:do great harm to"對(duì)…造成傷害",for fear of"唯恐,害怕",put off"推遲",be supposed not to do不應(yīng)該做…,looking forward to"渴望",還有一些語法知識(shí)和句型:a great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the smog.這句話用過去分詞做定語,F(xiàn)ortunately,People have realized the great harm caused by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment.這句話用動(dòng)名詞做賓語,.Effective measures are being taken to reduce the smog weather.這句話用了現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài),I will go to school by bike or on foot,I will tell whoever I meet to protect the environment as possible as they can.這句話用了whoever引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,還有范文用了What's worse,According to me,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫.
解答 Dear Bill,
I'm glad to receive your letter,thank you for your caring for the weather and my health.Now I'd like to tell you something about the haze.
Since the winter last year,the haze weather has occurred a lot of times in my hometown,which has done great harm to our daily life.(高分句型一)Many traffic accidents happened just because of the heavy haze weath er.Besides,more and more people have to go to see the doctor because of the serious diseases caused by the haze,and quite a lot of flights have to be put off.(高分句型二)A great number of people have to stay at home for fear of the poisonous air caused by the haze.
Having realized the great harm caused by the haze and the importance of protecting the environment,people all over the country are taking measures to reduce the haze weather.(高分句型三)The government suggests that people go to work or school by public transport,such as the bus and the underground.Also we should plant more trees.
As for me,I will go to school by bike or on foot,and I won't throw the waste anywhere.In addition,I will tell the people I meet to protect the environment as possible as they can.Would you like to tell me some good ideas?I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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