分析 本文是一篇提綱作文.看到英國人Rose 發(fā)布的廣告,說她想找一個陪跑族,并且愿意為此支付費用,根據(jù)所提供的材料信息,寫一封電子郵件.寫作時人稱以第一人稱和第二人稱為主,時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時為主.
【亮點說明】本文要點齊全、行文連貫.運(yùn)用了一些非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,on the internet 在網(wǎng)上;be interested in…對…感興趣;for one thing…for another…一方面…,另一方面…;look forward to 期待,盼望;considering…鑒于…,考慮到..
解答 Dear Rose,
I'm Li Hua,a 26-year-old man working as a professional bodybuilding trainer.I've seen your advertisement on the Internet that you want to find a running companion and you'd like to pay him.(高級句型)I'm quite interested in it.(自我介紹)For one thing,I happen to be in the same city with you.For another,I have years of experience in fitness training,so I know what works best for you.
I'd like to know something more about it.First,when and where do I have to go and run with you and how long does the running last each time?Besides,how much can I get paid each time?(詢問相關(guān)事宜)
Considering my rich experience,I believe I'm your best choice.(高級句型)I do hope I can be accepted.Looking forward to your early reply!(希望被錄用)
Yours,
Li Hua.
點評 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫,比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞,使文章流暢、通順,并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調(diào)感.(1)認(rèn)真審題,確定體裁. (2)構(gòu)思要點.根據(jù)題目要求,理解要表達(dá)的要點.設(shè)計好文章的層次段落,考慮所用時態(tài)、人稱等,把要點串聯(lián)起來,構(gòu)成文章框架.(3)選詞造句,避難選易.(4)認(rèn)真檢查,避免錯誤.仔細(xì)閱讀全文,查找是否有錯,注意時態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點是否有誤,句式是否正確.邏輯是否一致.
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