【題目】One day a nice old man found a cocoon () of a butterfly(蝴蝶). He took it home.

A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole.

Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no further. Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon. The butterfly then appeared easily.

But it had a swollen body and small, fragile wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body, which would be smaller in time. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling (慢慢爬行) around with a swollen body and fragile wings. It never was able to fly.

The man did not understand that the limited cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature’s way of forcing fluid (液體) from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1)以約30個(gè)詞概括故事的主要內(nèi)容。

2)以約120個(gè)詞就個(gè)人成長需要艱難生活的磨礪這一話題發(fā)表你的看法,內(nèi)容包括:

(1)你讀了這則故事后的感受。

(2)敘述當(dāng)前父母溺愛子女的現(xiàn)象和由此造成的后果。

(3)假如你是父母一方,你會如何磨礪自己的孩子?

【寫作要求】

1 使用實(shí)例支持你的論點(diǎn),不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

【評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】

概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,語篇連貫。

【答案】A kind man cut a cocoon open in order to relieve the pain of a butterfly struggling out of the cocoon, only to find it could never fly because of his help.

Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our willpower and contribute to our success.

Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him/her what should be done by himself. As a result, too much care and protection from parents deprives children of chances to grow strong by overcoming obstacles.

If I were a parent, I would first keep my child well informed that life is never easy and that he/she should be ready to face any difficulty. Besides, I would expose him/her to the hardships in life, providing him/her with chances to take on challenges.

【解析】本文是一篇材料類作文。1. 用約30個(gè)單詞概括上文主要內(nèi)容;不要用原文原句。但要囊括人物、事件,范文中使用了許多高級詞匯in order to,relieve the pain of,because of和句型only to find;struggling out of the cocoon,非謂語結(jié)構(gòu),以提高文章的檔次。

2. 用約120個(gè)單詞,以個(gè)人成長需要艱難生活的磨礪發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn),

考生在成文時(shí)應(yīng)注意:合理發(fā)揮想象力,使文章的表達(dá)自然,豐滿。文章的寫作要點(diǎn)要齊全: (1)你讀了這則故事后的感受。Our life is more or less like this…(2)敘述當(dāng)前父母溺愛子女的現(xiàn)象和由此造成的后果。Nowadays, with only one child in most families,…(3)假如你是父母一方,你會如何磨礪自己的孩子?If I were a parent, I would…注意文章的人稱:以第一人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意使用高級詞匯more or less,As a result,,deprive somebody of,keep my child well informedBesides, expose him/her to和句型,以提高文章的檔次;恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞、插入語,使文章表達(dá)自然,流暢。注意次數(shù):80—120之間。

【范文亮點(diǎn)】①It is these struggles or obstacles that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. 強(qiáng)調(diào)句;②parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him/her what should be done by himself.賓語從句;③If I were a parent, I would first keep my child well informed that虛擬語氣。

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