Question

11．本市的美國留學(xué)生Tom在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖，想結(jié)識一位中國朋友幫助他學(xué)習(xí)漢語和了解中國文化．假如你是光明中學(xué)的李華，得知消息后你愿意幫助Tom，并想約他見面，送給他一本好書．請你給Tom發(fā)一封電子郵件，其要點(diǎn)包括：1．表達(dá)你的意愿和打算；
2．簡單介紹書的內(nèi)容（關(guān)于中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、習(xí)俗和飲食等）；
3．約定見面的時間和地點(diǎn)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好．
Dear Tom，
I'm Li Hua from Guangming High school．
I learnedfrom the internet that you wish to improve your Chinese andknow more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）I'd like very much to beyour friend and help you．
Here I have a good book for you．It's about Chinesetraditional festivals，customs and foods and so on．Thebook is a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture，so I think you will like it．（高分句型二）
Now I hope to see you and give you the book．If it isconvenient to you，shall we meet at 5：30 tomorrow afternoon at our school gate？If not，let's try to find anothertime or place that is suitable for both of us．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your early reply．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息本市的美國留學(xué)生Tom在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖，想結(jié)識一位中國朋友幫助他學(xué)習(xí)漢語和了解中國文化．假如你是光明中學(xué)的李華，得知消息后你愿意幫助Tom，并想約他見面，送給他一本好書．請你給Tom發(fā)一封電子郵件．寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：表達(dá)你的意愿和打算；簡單介紹書的內(nèi)容（關(guān)于中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、習(xí)俗和飲食等）；約定見面的時間和地點(diǎn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be convenient to對…方便的話；Chinese traditional festivals中國傳統(tǒng)文化；and so on等等；If not如果不
I learned from the internet that you wish to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）
The book is a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture，so I think you will like it．（高分句型二）
If not，let's try to find another time or place that is suitable for both of us．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
       I'm Li Hua from Guangming High school．I learned from the internet that you wish to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture．（高分句型一）I'd like very much to be your friend and help you．
      Here I have a good book for you．It's about Chinese traditional festivals，customs and foods and so on．The book is a window through which you can get to know Chinese culture，so I think you will like it．（高分句型二）
      Now I hope to see you and give you the book．If it is convenient to you，shall we meet at 5：30 tomorrow afternoon at our school gate？If not，let's try to find another time or place that is suitable for both of us．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your early reply．
      Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．