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2．假定你是李華，計劃高三畢業(yè)后的暑假，找份兼職工作．下面的招聘廣告引起了你的注意，請根據(jù)要點（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）寫一封申請信．

注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's summer camp．I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．（高分句型一）
To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter（高分句型二）．Besides，I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates．More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（高分句型三）I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term．I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity．
Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，計劃高三畢業(yè)后的暑假，找份兼職工作．下面的招聘廣告引起了你的注意，請根據(jù)要點（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）寫一封申請信．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be interested in對…感興趣；To begin with首先；Besides另外；More importantly更重要的是；Look forward to盼望；
I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．（高分句型一）
To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter（高分句型二）
More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
       I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's summer camp．I'm very interested in this position and I think my personality and experience will qualify me for the job．（高分句型一）
       To begin with，I gain much experience of working with children from my part-time job as a babysitter（高分句型二）．Besides，I have been a helpful assistant for both my English teacher and my classmates．More importantly，I can speak English fluently，which will help me work with native teachers from England．（高分句型三）I will be available for the work on evenings and weekends and can start working from the end of this term．I would really appreciate it if you could give me this opportunity．
       Looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．