Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last Saturday,Mr.Wang is invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad and he drank a lot of beers.As the result,he got drunk.After the meal,his friends persuaded him not drive,but he insisted on drive home.Fortunately,the car he drove ran into a tall tree a few minute later.Worse still,he was badly injurying.Soon the police came to the scene and sent her to the hospital.Now he has stayed in hospital for several days and is waiting for being fined by the police.How Mr.Wang regrets what he did it!

Answer 1

【答案】

【解析】從“Last Saturday”可知，本文敘述的是過去的事情，謂語動詞需要用過去式。故將is改為was。

“He was so glad and he drank a lot of beers”他是如此的開心，他喝了很多啤酒。根據(jù)句意可分析，后句喝很多啤酒是因?yàn)樘�開心了。“So ……that……”屬固定句式，意為“太……以至于”。故將and改為that。

“As a result”屬固定搭配，意為結(jié)果。故將the改為a。

“persuad sb to do sth”屬固定句式，意為“說服某人做某事”。故在drive前加to。

介詞后跟動詞時，需要將動詞改為動名詞。故將drive改為driving。

“Fortunately,the car he drove ran into a tall tree a few minute later” 他開車撞到了一棵高高的樹上。根據(jù)句意分析，開成撞樹是一件不幸的事。故將Fortunately改為Unfortunately。

“a few ”后跟可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。故將“minute”改為“minutes”。

“he was badly injurying”分析句意及語法知識可知，他是被傷害的。故將injurying改為injured。

“sent her to the hospital.”此句中，從前文可知，文章主人公是男人。故將her改為him。

“How Mr.Wang regrets what he did it!”分析此句，what引導(dǎo)賓語從句，且在從句中作賓語。故從句中的賓語it多余。故將it去掉。