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【題目】假定英語老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后詞。

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2、只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I was young, my mother owned a store, in that she also sold magazines and books. I love to stay in the store, reading everything I found. It failed to help develop my ability to judge a good book, and it helped improve my reading skills. Then my mother began to focus on quality instead quantity. She bought books I wouldn’t find them in her store. Later, as my interest at theater began, I spent most of time read Shakespeare and George Bernard Shaw, to name the few. Anyway, good storytelling opened the window to different worlds I otherwise would have never entered. In additions, when I lived through a difficultly period books became advisers.

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【解析】1. 定語從句中，that作連接詞時，前面不能加介詞，而which有此用法。故將that改為which。

2. 通讀全文可知，本文時態(tài)是過去時，故謂語動詞都要用過去時。故將love改為loved。

3. “It failed to help develop my ability to judge a good book, and it helped improve my reading skills”此句句意為“它未能幫助我發(fā)展判斷一本好書的能力，它有助于提高我的閱讀技巧�！庇删湟饪芍�，前后兩句表達的句意是轉折而不是并列，故將and改為but。

4. instead of屬固定搭配，意為“而不是”。故在instead后加of。

5. “She bought books I wouldn’t find them in her store”此句中books后半句是定語從句，修飾books，且它在定語從句中作find的賓語，故將find后的賓語them去掉。

6. 表示“對……方面感興趣”應當用介詞in連接。故將at改為in。

7. spend time (in) doing sth屬固定用法，意為“花費時間去做某事”。故將read改為reading。

8. a few屬固定搭配，意為“幾個”。to name a few意為“舉幾個例子說說”。故把the改為a。

9. In addition屬固定搭配，意為“此外，另外”。故將additions改為addition。

10. “when I lived through a difficultly period books became advisers.”分析句子成分可知，difficultly修飾 period，而由語法知識可知，修飾名詞需要用形容詞。故將difficultly 改為difficult。