【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下寫出該加的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意: 1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;

2．只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies．Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies．The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old．The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water．Next, he is teaching to float in water．Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water．

【答案】

【1】去掉that

【2】將town改成towns

【3】將particularly改成particular

【4】將which改成where

【5】將were改成are

【6】在have與child之間添加a

【7】將with改成of

【8】將teaching改成taught

【9】將with改成without

【10】將him改成himself

【解析】

【1】去掉that 此處的that屬于贅余，as具有連詞的功能，所以不需要that連接。

【2】將town改成towns 在該句子當(dāng)中，因?yàn)榍懊嬗衜ost作限定，所以要將名詞town變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)形式。

【3】將particularly改成particular 考查形容詞與副詞的用法，在該句子當(dāng)中lessons是名詞，只有形容詞來修飾名詞。

【4】將which改成where Europe是一個(gè)地點(diǎn)，需要用where連接組成一個(gè)定語從句。

【5】將were改成are 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，從本文的第一句話就可以看出時(shí)態(tài)用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

【6】在have與child之間添加a 考查介詞的用法，child為可數(shù)名詞且是單數(shù)形式，所以用冠詞a。

【7】將with改成of 表示固定用法，the fear of...對(duì)...的恐懼。

【8】將teaching改成taught 考查被動(dòng)語態(tài)，是他被教，所以用taught。

【9】將with改成without 考查句意分析，作者想要表達(dá)的是“沒有任何恐懼的游泳”。

【10】將him改成himself 考查反身代詞，即當(dāng)動(dòng)作的承接者與發(fā)生者是同一個(gè)人的情況下使用。

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