【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 (∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線 (＼) 劃掉。

修改:在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

I still remember that cold day when Chris and I go skating on a lake. While enjoying ourselves, I suddenly noticed something unusual. The ice broke and at the moment. I warned Chris to take care, he slipped into the lake. I was too frightening to know what to do. I cried for help anxious. Hearing my cries, a young man rushed over, jump into the lake to save Chris. At last, he was out of the water and we immediately sent him to the near hospital. After short while, Chris’ parents arrived. They expressed their thank to the young man. How a respectable man!

【答案】1. go →went

2. ourselves →myself

3. 去掉and

4. frightening→ frightened

5. anxious →anxiously

6. jump →jumping

7. near →nearest/nearby

8. After 后加a

9. thank →thanks

10. How →What

【解析】

本文是記敘文。作者和Chris去湖上滑冰，結(jié)果冰裂了Chris掉進(jìn)湖里。一位年輕人路過跳進(jìn)水里救出了Chris，Chris被送到醫(yī)院。作者表達(dá)了對年輕人的感謝和尊敬。

1. 考查動詞時態(tài)。本文講述的是過去發(fā)生的一件事，與上下文時態(tài)一致用一般過去時。故go 改為went。

2. 考查代詞一致。句意：正當(dāng)我玩得開心的時候，我突然注意到一些不尋常的事情。句中主語是I，前后指代一致，故ourselves 改為myself。

3. 考查連詞。此處指那一刻冰裂開了，主語是The ice ，謂語是broke，at the moment是時間狀語，句中and是多余的。故去掉 and。

4. 考查形容詞。frightening “令人恐懼的”通常用來修飾物，此處指我很害怕，修飾人用frightened。故frightening 改為frightened。

5. 考查副詞。修飾動詞cried用副詞，指“焦急地哭喊”，故anxious 改為anxiously。

6. 考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，句中已有謂語動詞rushed，此處用非謂語動詞。主語a young man和jump是主動關(guān)系，用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。故jump 改為jumping。

7. 考查形容詞或最高級。此處指我們立刻把Chris送到最近的醫(yī)院，用形容詞最高級。也可以指附近的醫(yī)院，用nearby修飾hospital。故near 改為nearest/nearby。

8. 考查冠詞。表示“過了片刻，過了一會兒”是after a while，是固定短語。故 After 后加a。

9. 考查名詞。做expressed的賓語，由their修飾用名詞，表示名詞“謝謝”要用復(fù)數(shù)，故 thank改為 thanks。

10. 考查感嘆句。how引導(dǎo)感嘆句時后加形容詞或副詞，此處感嘆名詞man要用what。故How 改為What。

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