Question

【題目】假定你是晨光中學(xué)的李津，看到校報(bào)的英文專欄刊登了一則消息：來自英國的交換生Johnson正在尋找“接待家庭”，你很感興趣。請(qǐng)你用英文給校報(bào)寫一封申請(qǐng)信。

內(nèi)容包括：

（1）自我介紹；

（2）家庭條件及個(gè)人優(yōu)勢；

（3）安排英國朋友參加的活動(dòng)。

注意：(1) 詞數(shù)不少于100詞；(2) 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：接待家庭 host family

Dear Editor,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Jin

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam，

On seeing the information in the school newspaper, I learned that Johnson are scheduled to study as an exchange student in our school. I sincerely hope my family can have the honor to be a host family.

My parents are caring and friendly. Our home is next to the city center where you can easily get access to shopping and convenient transportation. What’s more, we can offer one separate room for the student.

As for me, I have a good command of English so that he can feel free to communicate with me in daily life. So I am convinced I will be a qualified host. If given the chance，I’ll invite him to join in my family get-together. Besides，we can show him around the city，getting him to know more about the real life and culture in China.

In a word，I’m eager to provide an impressive trip for the foreign friend. I hope you can take my application into consideration. Thank you in advance.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】

本文是一篇應(yīng)用文中的申請(qǐng)信，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李津，給校報(bào)寫信介紹個(gè)人及家庭情況，還說明安排的具體活動(dòng)，希望成為英國的交換生Johnson的“接待家庭”。 本文要求考生自行組織要點(diǎn)，總體難度較大。

第1步：審題。根據(jù)文字提示可知本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求考生把自己當(dāng)成李津，給校報(bào)寫信介紹個(gè)人及家庭情況，還說明安排的具體活動(dòng)，希望成為英國的交換生Johnson的“接待家庭”。全文以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱為主。

第2步：組織要點(diǎn)。（1）自我介紹；（2）家庭條件及個(gè)人優(yōu)勢：父母性格親切友好，家庭生活便利，有獨(dú)立房間；自己的英語水平較高；（3）安排英國朋友參加的活動(dòng)：參加家庭聚會(huì)；參觀城市了解中國文化。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行遣詞造句，關(guān)鍵詞為have the honor to be a host family、next to the city center、get access to、offer one separate room、have a good command of English、 free to communicate、join in my family get-together、show him around the city、take my application into consideration等。同時(shí)注意申請(qǐng)書的慣用語和習(xí)慣表達(dá)。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。