Question

假如你是李華,你剛得知你們班的英國(guó)朋友Bob出了事故,對(duì)此你和你的同學(xué)們都感到很難過(guò),現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們決定讓你代表他們給Bob寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信。信的內(nèi)容如下:
1.所有同學(xué)對(duì)他都表示同情,打算星期五下午派你為代表去看望他并給他帶去他喜歡讀的書(shū)；
2.讓他不要擔(dān)心學(xué)習(xí),等他出院后,你們會(huì)幫他趕上；如果有什么需要你們做的事情,請(qǐng)他告知；
3.希望他在病床上不要過(guò)于悲傷,祝愿他早日康復(fù)。
注意:(1) 參考詞匯:on behalf of 代表；
     (2)詞數(shù):100左右。
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Answer 1

Dear Bob,
     We were just told about the accident you had. I’m sorry to hear about it and our other classmates are all sad about the news. I’m going to see you on behalf of others on this Friday afternoon. I will bring you a couple of books you will enjoy. We will help you to catch up in school as soon as you are out of hospital. If there is anything else we can do for you, please let me know.
     All of us send our best wishes for your quick recovery. Don’t worry about your studies.
     We do hope that you will not be too sad in bed and that you will recover soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
 

試題分析：這是一篇慰問(wèn)信，所以在語(yǔ)言的使用上要正式化，另外注意題目的要求，有三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，所以要按照這樣一個(gè)順序去寫(xiě)，注意不要有遺漏。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。慰問(wèn)信
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于慰問(wèn)信，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字?jǐn)?shù)，100字左右。