分析 假如你是一名高二年級的學生,你發(fā)現(xiàn)班上有些同學晚上學習到深夜.白天也不安排休息時間,但往往課堂上昏昏欲睡,有些同學飲食習慣不好,不吃早餐.請你寫篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上勸同學們合理安排作息時間,注意健康飲食,保證學習好、身體好..寫作時不要逐句翻譯,可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全,語句通順,同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關系.根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞,同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩.
【亮點說明】It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.運用固定句式; And some classmates seldom have breakfast,which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.
運用定語從句;In my opinion,it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.運用并列句;We must learn to make wise use of our time,and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I wonder if you agree with me.運用only的倒裝句;Recently,I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either,but they often cannot help falling asleep in class.此句式為文章增色,顯得文章很有檔次.
解答 Dear classmates,
It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.Recently,I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either,but they often cannot help falling asleep in class.(高分句型一) And some classmates seldom have breakfast,which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health.(高分句型二)
In my opinion,it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time,and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.(高分句型三)I wonder if you agree with me.
Thank you!
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應,用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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