Question

13．閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文．
Ten years ago，Sun Shenglong gave up his job of an annual salary of 600，000yuan to become a full-time father．After ten years of hard work，he has finally made his daughter become a violin virtuoso （大師）．
What Sun Shenglong did has aroused wide public concern in China．In September，his new book"Who kidnapped Chinese parents？"which took him 10years of efforts to write was published．But in the process of publication，both editors and staff are wondering：Is that worth it？Why do some parents sacrifice their lives for their children？Do children really want their parents to accompany them？
Some people argue that adults have their own lives．It is not worth sacrificing their own well-being for children．Others think that Sun Shenglong forced changes in the children's growth．
Indeed，Sun Shenglong had to have his own business．He experienced a lot of pain since childhood：his father died and his mother remarried．He worked as a little tailor，a high school teacher，a newspaper reporter and editor，and finally achieved the implementation of a Shanghai newspaper editor which was to him a brilliant future wave．
It was then that his daughter learned to play the violin and revealed the talent．Several violin experts said she would be potential for development．So，Sun Shenglong completely gave up his job and went all out to accompany his daughter．
His painstaking efforts finally bear fruit．His daughter won several international awards and has become famous worldwide．
寫作內(nèi)容
1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓Ω改冈摬辉摓榱撕⒆映刹哦鵂奚�自己的事業(yè)的想法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）你同意上文中這位父親的做法嗎？
（2）以你父母或者你周圍的一些父母為例，談?wù)勊麄兪侨绾螢樽优�成才做出犧牲�?br />（3）你對父母為了孩子犧牲自己的事業(yè)的看法．
寫作要求
1．作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱．
評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫．
In order to have enough time to accompany his daughter to learn theviolin，Sun Shenglong gave up his well-paid job to be a full-time father，which has caused a heateddebate in China．
I am not in favor of what Sun Shenglong did although he has succeeded inturning his daughter into a violin virtuoso．However，many parents around me also make sacrifices for theirchildren．Some change their jobs while others move near the key schools in orderto make it more convenient for their children to study．And some mothers even giveup their favorite jobs to accompany their children．
As for me，I don't think it is appropriate for parents to quit their jobs in orderto provide better conditions for their children．For one thing，parents have their own careers and they can display theirtalents and make contributions to society．For another，children should learn to pursue their dreams on their owninstead of totally depending on their parents．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照"三段式"模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由或列舉事例．第三段：個人觀點．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱一般用第三人稱．重要短語：in order to（目的是），accompany sb （陪伴某人），give up sth （放棄某物），cause a heated debate （引起熱烈的爭辯），make sacrifices for （為…做出犧牲），quit sth  （放棄），provide sth for sb （給某人提供某物），make contributions to…（認(rèn)識，結(jié)識…），pursue one's dreams（追逐夢想），depend on（依賴，依靠）．

解答 In order to have enough time to accompany his daughter to learn theviolin，Sun Shenglong gave up his well-paid job to be a full-time father，which has caused a heateddebate in China．【高分句型】（概括）
I am not in favor of what Sun Shenglong did although he has succeeded inturning his daughter into a violin virtuoso．However，many parents around me also make sacrifices for theirchildren．Some change their jobs while others move near the key schools in orderto make it more convenient for their children to study．And some mothers even giveup their favorite jobs to accompany their children．（舉例說明父母是如何為子女成才做出犧牲的）
As for me，I don't think it is appropriate for parents to quit their jobs in orderto provide better conditions for their children．【高分句型】For one thing，parents have their owncareers and they can display their talents and make contributions to society．For another，children should learn topursue their dreams on their own instead of totally depending on their parents．（自己的看法）

點評 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．