Question

4．你堂兄建華在國外學(xué)習(xí)，你們經(jīng)常用英文通信．他即將完成學(xué)業(yè)，不久前來信就是否回國工作征求你的意見．請根據(jù)下列提示回信：
1．建議他回國；
2．你的理由是：學(xué)有所用，就業(yè)容易；照顧父母．
注意；1．詞數(shù)100左右．
  2．行文應(yīng)連貫，內(nèi)容應(yīng)完整．
3．開頭語與落款已為你寫好．
June 8th
Dear Jianhua，
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago．I've been thinking about the question you asked me．（高分句型）In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies abroad．（建議回國）For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China．（高分句型）It will be quite easy for you to find a good job．（高分句型）In fact，I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old．（高分句型）（回國理由）Therefore，I think it's a good idea for you to return．So what are you waiting for？
Best wishes，
Minghua．

Answer 1

分析 本文在文字提示里只是給出部分的要點，具體需要我們做詳細(xì)說明．在建議回國的理由方面，可以從學(xué)有所用；中國的發(fā)展給海歸人士提供更好的發(fā)展平臺，更好的機(jī)遇．國內(nèi)的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展良好等方面展開做具體說明．要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力．
  亮點說明   范文要點全面，語言簡潔但也不乏好的詞組和句型：in my opinion 在我看來；hope to 希望做…；I've been thinking about the question you asked me．這句話用了定語從句；For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China．這句使用了主語從句；It will be quite easy for you to find a good job．這句話用了it作形式主語；For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old．這句話用了it作形式主語和as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．

解答 June 8th
Dear Jianhua，
I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago．I've been thinking about the question you asked me．（高分句型）In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies abroad．（建議回國）For one reason，what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China．（高分句型）It will be quite easy for you to find a good job．（高分句型）In fact，I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For another reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old．（高分句型）（回國理由）Therefore，I think it's a good idea for you to return．So what are you waiting for？
 Best wishes，
                                                               Minghu

點評 提綱類寫作的文章較開放式的文體，比較好寫．學(xué)生在寫作的過程中，首先思路要清晰，要對所表達(dá)的句子通順的說出來，遇到不會的要學(xué)會替換所用語，來達(dá)到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對于表達(dá)觀點的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來加強(qiáng)文章的層次感，適當(dāng)運用俗語，運用平時常用的句式來使文章富有變化，表達(dá)地道得體．