Question

3．假設(shè)你的同學(xué)因自己的肥胖而苦惱，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下建議寫一篇英語短文．
[寫作內(nèi)容]

Don'ts	Dos
不要吃過多油膩的食物；睡覺前不要吃零食．否則可能增加體重或消化不良（indigestion）．	要保持均衡飲食；每天需要至少一個(gè)小時(shí)的運(yùn)動(dòng)，比如可以選擇步行上學(xué)，這樣既有利于減肥，又可以保護(hù)環(huán)境．
做到持之以恒，只有這樣才會(huì)在不久的將來擁有苗條的身材．

[寫作要求]
1．只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；
2．首句已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫．
Dear classmate，
I've learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions．     ．

Answer 1

分析 本文為英文短文，主題為給朋友減肥建議．
寫作要點(diǎn)為：1，減肥可做的事；2，減肥不可做的事．

解答 I've learned that you are trying to lose weight and I am glad to give you some suggestions．
On （the） one hand，you shouldn't eat too much fatty food or eat snacks before you sleep．Otherwise，you may gain weight or suffer from indigestion．On the other hand，you should keep a balanced diet．Meanwhile，doing exercise for at least one hour per day is needed，like walking to school，which is not only beneficial for your weight loss，but also helps protect the environment．
Above all，you should be persistent，because only in this way can you become slim in the near future．

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